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Argumentative Essay Claim



    My claim is to stop having doctors kill teens suffering from depression, sickness, camcer, etc. It’s not right at all. It’s not a good influence on kids either. To have kids see what some doctors do and they see that some doctors kill their own patients is not a good influence. It’s not fair to the family either. I don’t think no family would want a doctor to kill someone they care for. It’s sad and dumb.

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  1. Ms. Haury's Blog LogFebruary 28, 2018 at 9:21 AM

    This is a very interesting topic to discuss and I look forward to reading your paper. Thank you for sharing your post this week.

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